大作文

　　总结一篇英文文章后评论一下

　　简洁说明：从文章6段中分段摘抄一些句子形成基本描述，然后点评2-3句。

　　电影(地球2)planet Earth2比(X事实)X Factor更吸引年轻人，在电影技术和 音乐上很棒，同时告诉大家地球遭到了破坏，年轻人更加关注环境。

　　文章要点：

　　听到歌手的哭诉，年轻人最后喜欢大自然了。

　　BBC确定电影(地球2)planet Earth2比(X事实)X Factor更吸引年轻人。

　　编剧(英文narrator)说技术上的突破使得动物更加接近人，环境更逼真，歌手的音乐也是一个关键因素。

　　同时观众看到地球环境被破坏，年轻人的未来是与环境有关的。

　　简单点评下，要如何保护地球环境。

　　大作文：

　　Parentally, the moive Planet Earth II is more popular than X Factor among the youngsters which has been confirmed by the BBC. It succeeds in the technology which make the animal more vivid and the music make audience be personally on the scene. As the meantime, it shows that the Earth has been destroyed and remind that the young people should pay more attention to our environment for that it would be always be beautiful with the destroy.

　　Form the movie, we teenagers should disguise a major accident as a minor one. It can be executed as the following two aspects. For the one hand, it is momentous for us to be frugal with the paper product to reduce the deforestation. For the other hand, we should cycle as often as we can rather than drive a car since bike-share program have been accepted by the majority which will do good for the environment.





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